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At the end of the metaphor
I see myself as an empty vessel
but I cannot use it.
It’s been overdone.
So what if amphoras seem so inspiring
right at this moment?
I can't make poetry
that has been written thousands of times before,
since the ancient Greeks.
I am wringing my brains to drip
a metaphor, an image, something
to start my poem.
My verses squirm,
coil and hiss inside my chest
digging their way out
with venomous tails.
Feel that? Do you feel it?
See what I'm talking about?
Where are the words of this world?
Where are the beautiful, fresh, crispy new morning words
that smell like night jasmine?
Without words coming through my pen
I'll need a doctor,
I'll need open chest surgery
to extract this entangled mess of
you know,
everything that's bothering me these days
anxiety, dreams, end-of-summer rains,
no idea what to cook for dinner.
Right, so
it looks like this amphora of mine
was not that empty after all.
Oh, you treacherous, beautiful, antique cliché!
Wednesday, August 12, 2009
by Lori Tiron-Pandit